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She appeared in the form of an angel,
So beautiful... but yet so distant.
Her eyes were an amazement,
They looked crystalized.
But you could see the deep feeling in them,
As she stared right at you.
When you talked it seemed as you were too loud,
For her small ears looked too delicate.
Her touch was genuinely soft,
Along with her stare.
You would be nervous just to be in front of her,
Such a beauty it is to see her...
Such a privilege to be beside her,
As she guarded the heart of her lover.
So beautiful... but yet so distant.
Her eyes were an amazement,
They looked crystalized.
But you could see the deep feeling in them,
As she stared right at you.
When you talked it seemed as you were too loud,
For her small ears looked too delicate.
Her touch was genuinely soft,
Along with her stare.
You would be nervous just to be in front of her,
Such a beauty it is to see her...
Such a privilege to be beside her,
As she guarded the heart of her lover.
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-Listening to: Lips of an Angel by Hinder
-Thinking about: Life
-Time: 3:29 pm
As always just writing away, this song inspired me of course with the angel, so yea XD
-Thinking about: Life
-Time: 3:29 pm
As always just writing away, this song inspired me of course with the angel, so yea XD
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I like the part about the ears.
But I wish you hadn't mentioned that song. It got really popular the first time I ever got my heart broken and the guy who did the breaking loved Hinder so I listened to it over and over and now it just brings up angry feelings.
But I still like the poem.
But I wish you hadn't mentioned that song. It got really popular the first time I ever got my heart broken and the guy who did the breaking loved Hinder so I listened to it over and over and now it just brings up angry feelings.
But I still like the poem.