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As the dark creeps in my room,
I prepare myself for my tomb.
I can feel it’s presence,
The presence of death’s essence.
I can see its secretive darkness slithering inside,
Without any worry and nothing to hide.
As it moves about,
I don’t want to shout.
For if I dare to,
You know what will happen, it’s true.
I will be swallowed whole,
Sucked into a dark hole.
Without any escape or thought,
I am trying to remember what I have been taught.
My eyes are wide open against the darkness that surrounds me,
I could let this be, happily with no worry that I can see.
But then I remember your face,
In this secret dark place…
I can’t believe you still exist in my head,
Here, as I lay down in bed…
With so much darkness your face appears,
My eyes start to let out tears.
For I am not afraid of the darkness,
I am afraid of you leaving me here.
©2008-2009 ~unforgetablesoul
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thinking again... like always...

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:iconstephanie-satsuky:
oooooooo i love it amazing, beautiful, great job u make me cry ...... i really like it it's too woaaaaaaa.... impressive¡¡¡.... :) i feel so identified with this cause my best friend is leaving the city so.... wuaaaaaa really great i love this... great job :) ... i don't have words to describe how i feel....

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:love: /J@K€-STEPHª(\)I€ / :love:
EL AMOR CONCEDE A LOS DEMAS EL PODER PARA DESTRUIRTE...... :( :cry:
:iconxxdeathskullxx:
this ones my fav:Dlol

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i press death apond your lips this will be our final kiss.... your glass tears fall and shater stabing my heart again..........:heartbreaker:
:iconunforgetablesoul:
i'm glad for that ^^

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The silence gets us nowhere...
:iconunforgetablesoul:
i'm really glad u like it :D thank u

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The silence gets us nowhere...
:iconstephanie-satsuky:
thanks to u to write this... i really love it really... :)

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___:[ d @lGuNa FoRm@ SoLo t PiDo... (W)¡¡¡LlEvAm CoNtIgO!!!___:[

:love: /J@K€-STEPHª(\)I€ / :love:
EL AMOR CONCEDE A LOS DEMAS EL PODER PARA DESTRUIRTE...... :( :cry:
:iconunforgetablesoul:
thanks :D

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The silence gets us nowhere...
:iconthe-dreamwalker:
I love it , especially the end .
"For I am not afraid of the darkness,
I am afraid of you leaving me here."
That's gorgeous (:
:iconstephanie-satsuky:
But then I remember your face,
In this secret dark place…
I can’t believe you still exist in my head,
Here, as I lay down in bed…
With so much darkness your face appears,
My eyes start to let out tears.
For I am not afraid of the darkness,
I am afraid of you leaving me here.

this is the part i most like it thank u very again for write this...

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___:[ d @lGuNa FoRm@ SoLo t PiDo... (W)¡¡¡LlEvAm CoNtIgO!!!___:[

:love: /J@K€-STEPHª(\)I€ / :love:
EL AMOR CONCEDE A LOS DEMAS EL PODER PARA DESTRUIRTE...... :( :cry:
:iconunforgetablesoul:
ur welcome, i'm very glad u like it.

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The silence gets us nowhere...

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